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RE: Sci-fi Novel: The Ultimate Debate - Part 2: Sun Moi's Test With Ogox

in #fiction • 6 years ago

This part was as intersting as the previous, thanks.
I would want to point out some grammatical errors:-

  1. It's been six months and he couldn't ->make<- any significant progress.
  2. reutine->routine
    3.Saiki Wakanabe->Saiki Watanabe
    4.now part of the family now->now part of the family.
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     6 years ago 

    I edited them 😎

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       6 years ago 

      I wish I had steemians correctly my grammar like that!! ;) sweet

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         6 years ago 

        I like this part, if possible please post other parts soon, i am wattling rest of part. I like it.

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