Oooh, things are heating up in Misty Vale!
A baby with powers she's far too young to comprehend - what else will she do before someone gets a handle on this? **Love it!
Brent is awesome - a widower, a soldier, a body guard, but sensitive
Eudora is powerful, respected, even feared, but she's also a young woman (younger than most of her kind), and for all her power, she's vulnerable
Amazing how much you pack into a scene, showing but not **telling
Well done!!!