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RE: Attack of the Heffalump Bees, Part 1 of 6

in #fiction6 years ago

Eagerly waiting for the rest 5 parts. Wow your descriptive ability of music in this story is too dazzling, I love the way you gave your feedback on all the performances at the event lol, seems quite that the lady with the birth mark may have a rare skin disorder really from my opinion though.
The first two line of the heading is awesome.
“ if you like bad b movies then the second best thing” this line will hold all the readers here.

The last piece of the prose plot ushered in the coming of the bees and the attack, it seems many will be stung and their sufferings will be funny hahahaha.