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RE: Unwind ~ Remain

in #fiction5 years ago

I remember reading that line now, and I thought when he said the "you had to take her too" part, I thought he had done something to harm her, or maybe he had killed her but escaped being charged.

But now that I think about it you had earlier written something about him messing around with interns, and before Mike got the knife he was saying those kinds of things. So the clue was there, I just didn't pick up on it. I went with unexpected violence for some reason. :)

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It helps a lot though because now I know not to be too vague. Thanx.

You're welcome. I think like most things, being vague once in a while is a good thing, and in some cases, it's even preferred.