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Salutations @geekgirl, thank you so much for taking the time to read my page! The Grammer and spelling problems are an on going thing that I wish I could fix. I wrote this page on a cheap walmart phone through text while I was in bed in the dark at 1 am, so I'm surprised it's not a lot worse ;)-~~. I'm super excited someone read it! For real, thank you.

Story-line has a great potential. Curious to see what happens next. If you clean up typos, develop the story and 2-3 more paragraphs in the next chapter it would be a great candidate for curation. I read a lot of stories as part of my curie curation activities.

I will be working on it as much as possible, I hope to get a page a night. I don't think each "page" following one another will be the cohesive story as if one reads a novel. It's more of an idea that when I do manage to get to page 300 or so, I should be able to use it as a detailed outline for an actual book. Lots of editing needed of course, but this seems like a great forum to work from! I know I'm actually excited about it, and if even one person, such as yourself, is reading them, then it will be even more of a push for me to keep writing. Any and all recomendations are very much appreciated! I'm not quite sure what curation is, but I'll look it up.

Truly a pleasure,

@bojamison

you might want to consider joining discord fiction workshop. there is a lot of help and support for fiction writers there.