Once In A Life Time (narrative for writing at school)
Hi Steemians,
A new year and more writing to at school, this year I thought I would share my work here to see the results of school marks VS Steemit with getting the lowest mark in the class, is my work really that bad....
Once In A Life Time
Twilight was approaching , the clouds were luster. Breaking through the clouds was giving Jarrid jubilant. Jarrid looked back and caught a glimpse of something FIRE. Jarrid’s heart dropped , he felt like he was floating in a bare void. There was no one but his own body and the feeling he wouldn’t see his enchanting wife again.
The man fell conscious again.
The man stopped the Black Pearl with a screeching halt the ship went quiet.Jarrid rushed to the starboard side of the vessel gazing down , he realized his propeller had caught on fire. Then he became cautious of the water bucket and the long piece of rope that was beside him.
Jarrid quickly poured the water on the propeller to murder the flames. Jarrid tossed the rope and lassoed it directly on the propeller. With all his weight he tried to pull it up , but during him pulling it up he saw the rope snap as the propeller fell in the deep big blue sea thousands of miles below.
“Jarrid , your so stupid ;that was the only thing that could get you back home UGH”. Jarrid’s conscience was now filled with doubt ; he will never get home now.
Hours past as Jarrid continued to sorrow in sadness. Until he heard an unusual sound that was coming from the stern of the vessel. Jarrid went to go look but he couldn't see anything suddenly he recalled having his spyglass in his jetted pocket (inside his jacket). Jarrid reached in and pulled it out and placed it in front of his eye.
Yonder Jarrid gazed with the spyglass he could see something big emerged out of the luster of clouds. It was something out of the ordirnary. TURTLES hundreds of them floating. Jarrid tried to make sense of this but there was no reasonable explanation to these floating turtles.One by one they passed Jarrid. One of them stared right down to the bottom of Jarrids soul.As it passed he felt a strike of cold air, it made him get shivers up his spine. Right then and there he recalled being stranded and not having a way home.
Jarrid raced to the bow of the vessel, soon he was there. Jarrid tripped on a ginormous bundle of rope. “ I can use this ” Jarrid thought. The old man grabbed the rope and tossed half of it , he managed to latch it on the marvelous creature.
Then with a swing and a bounce the ship was off. After a few minutes the turtle managed to snap the rope.