Oh my gosh, this is marvelous! Thank you for showing us the development process for your story. I've resteemed this one! Great story, too. It provides a fantastic moment in time in the midst of a much larger drama. And I agree with Bex that this has potential for a longer version.
Thanks @jayna. That's high praise. Really appreciate it. I'm glad the process part of the post is interesting . I wasn't going to add it, but it seems like it was helpful to folks.