240 character Zapfic freewrite - Advantage
Kerry was better at chess.
Marjorie's rock-n-roll was the best.
Jennifer’s slalom won Olympic Gold.
Alyson psychology had me at her advantage.
While Nell won the Nobel, Bianca posed undressed.
These women I loved were all better than me. But when I said goodbye, each and every one cried.
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Hi! I really loved this so gave it a 100% upvote. BUT! It is 283 characters long! You are going to have to trim 43 characters from it for it to be included in the zapfic contest (240 max).
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I did not know whether you wanted 240 with or without whitespaces. I gave you as story of 240 words with out counting without whitespace.
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Sooo, given that, here goes a trimmed down version for your judging pleasure, sir: a 240 word story of no particular title:
Kerry was better at chess
Marjorie's rock-n-roll was the best
Alyson psychology had me at her advantage
Nell won the Nobel. Bianca posed undressed
These women I loved were all better than me
But when I said goodbye, each and every one had cried.