Thanks glad you liked it, yeah there were a few moments when I actually felt the aussie come through on the reread - Dialogue is not my strongest area, so I am trying to stick with language I use and see used often lol.

The 'mum' line made me think maybe 'ma' would be less awkward for Americans to read, then there's the ' for fucks sake' line lol - not sure but I think I do better when I use this language, but I'm not sure it still needs work in general.

I haven't had a chance to check out the steemlords posts but I will certainly try, I have been hearing about it just swamped at the moment.

Thanks for checking this out - Cheers :)