Very mysterious... feels like our protagonist is on the verge of being dragged into events well beyond their control. Is this a standalone piece or is there more coming? It would work as both although it definitely changes how you read it. Such a tantalising write!
This one left me with mixed feelings.. it's because I believe I would get sleepless nights if something like this really happened to me.
I love your style of writing and the way you put up your sentences together. I'm just not that fond of the theme but this is a personal choice as I am not good with dealing with sad/frightening/mystical situations :)
But if you would ever write a book I would for sure read it!
Very sad. And made me think of the videos and the sounds we've all been seeing over the last few days. Heart breaking. Really well written.
Yeah, that was definitely the inspiration. Thank you for reading!
Very mysterious... feels like our protagonist is on the verge of being dragged into events well beyond their control. Is this a standalone piece or is there more coming? It would work as both although it definitely changes how you read it. Such a tantalising write!
Thank you! It was a freewrite so I actually have no idea where I was going with it. I had all the poor kids at the border on my mind... :/
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This little story left me with many questions. It certainly could turn into a longer story if you felt so inclined!
Oh, no! What a maddening situation! No police, but what if something awful is happening. Can you star 69 or something?
Great freewrite!
This one left me with mixed feelings.. it's because I believe I would get sleepless nights if something like this really happened to me.
I love your style of writing and the way you put up your sentences together. I'm just not that fond of the theme but this is a personal choice as I am not good with dealing with sad/frightening/mystical situations :)
But if you would ever write a book I would for sure read it!
Great story. A terrible feeling never to know what was going on.
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I love the way you narrate. It's a very engaging text, will it continue?
I don't think so... I don't really know where it was going. But maybe!
Thank you for reading!
You have heart and the world needs heart! :-) I love the way you write.