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RE: The Corrupt Earth: Steemhouse Writing Prompt

in #fiction5 years ago

A very well told story. From the beginning with the sentence

The birds always knew.

One knows that there will be an earth-man-evolution connection. Maybe you don't pose like that but I perceived that feeling from the beginning.
You kept the thread in an excellent way, with adequate vocabulary and with the necessary tension to reach the end.

I loved reading you!