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RE: ADSactly Short Story - Eva in Ghostland

in #fiction6 years ago

Until Eve finally knew fear! I believe that at some point, people face that something that surpasses us and that is above us, maybe not physically but spiritually. The fact that she is a faceless woman, but cries and talks, cannot be a normal creature. When Eva arrives at this place, she doubts her courage, but even so, she continues her search in the forest, to then really face this mysterious being and face herself. I like the intensity of the story, the metaphors you use to let us know some things, such as that it was a place that even angels dared not visit. That comparison already tells us how terrible it can be and what to expect. Thank you for sharing, @samminator

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There are things way beyond what our normal senses can explain; and that was exactly what Eva witnessed. At least she now knows that mysteries do exist.
Thanks for the kind words