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RE: Art Prompt Writing Contest: Nothing But Canvas
Great work. Your storyline is so simple in concept, but you got so much depth out of it!
Great work. Your storyline is so simple in concept, but you got so much depth out of it!
Thanks @negativer. With each passing day it gets easier to write about old men. 🕘
I sometimes feel like the CCR of short fiction: same three chords over and over but somehow, it just falls together fresh in each song. Working on a couple of new chords and maybe even a 7/8 beat!
I just realized I forgot to use the word "pocked" for the stars. Perfect story to use it. There once was a discussion on the Block about that word... could've pulled all that in here with just a word.
sigh
Ah yes. Pocked. I had pocked in my 'Numb' story in the queue, and people were questioning if that was a real word. Not that they didn't know what it meant...but if it was a real word. It sounds exactly like what you'd expect the word means.
Pocked.
Like our body as we get older.
ties it all together
after the contest i may work that word in here... it is a great word.