So did Doctor Moore take her own medicine, along with the part of it that avoided the out-of-control cancer? Or was that part just covered up all along the trials after all? Hmm.

(You change her name from Luisa to Lea in the last paragraph, BTW.)

EDIT: For that matter, even if someone were immortal in the sense of never dying of old age, they would still be susceptible to cancer and other diseases, right? Hmm.