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RE: An old man into his body - Freewrite - Short story

in #fiction5 years ago

WOW! so much beautiful language in this!
I understand that we are young, as long as we have a yearning to blossom and a dream to fly
And this killer last line
I feel that I witnessed the very moment when my father let an old man into his body.
The old man entered his body at the moment those wise words became a mere platitude for him, they lost their meaning, and he lost his then too. Freaking incredible piece. Thank you.