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RE: This One's For You

in #fiction5 years ago (edited)

Absolutely wonderful piece of writing @letalis-laetitia

I was there in the place you described, in my memory, sand in sandwiches and ice-cream shaded by one hand from the wind, as I tried to make it last for as long as possible.

For me it was a place called freshfields beach near to Formby in Merseyside. We'd go on the train in the summer - that timeless feeling of a child's facination building structures in the sand still simmer at the edge of my memory, but it's faded somewhat, like a painting in a darkened room.

You're descriptive writing here is so good! You made me feel nostalgia deep down at a root level.

If you're in the mood for fiction there's an excellent prompt coming out that I wrote at The Ink Well tomorrow at 5pm GMT. I'd love to see a story from you inspired by it.

If you're busy, no worries. Reading this was enough for me.

Thanks for sparking some long forgotten memories with your words.