Hi @everhart. I saw your post in the 'Isle of Write' room where you said you'd really like to hear any feedback anyone may have. It's all good from me 😉 I was particularly impressed with your ability to set the scene using haunting and unique imagery -

A song trickled into his senses. As the tune entered it echoed and grew.

The mist was so faint that the silver light they bled was like the ghosting streams of an aurora.

I found it to be intriguing opening chapter for a fantasy fiction series. Keep writing them you build character well. I look forward to reading the next chapter!