really interesting story. Describing the poverty among us which is certainly a scourge for everyone. feel how hard life is lacking. then you invite complications that are actually simple but become interesting when you end the story without execution that clearly forces the reader to use imagination and guess the desired end. Do you want a happy ending or hang until there will be a continuation of the story.
I remember three not the past, I commented on the post @greenrun and suggested a story with a ending that hung. and after three months of being dormant I was not active in steemit today I saw the post @adsactly as I wanted
Thank you @jcalero
thank you @adsactly
thank you steemit
warm regard from Indonesia