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RE: Dreaming to the Music of a Jackhammer (Madness in 1000 Words or Less)

in #fiction7 years ago

Damn, this is what I call fiction. People should come learn how to write fiction from this. Thisbgot me glued and I couldnt just stop reading till I hit you apology note...hehehe

You've done a great job with thisb@donkeypong. Never knew you could venture into fictions as well.

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Sometimes it's not just about fiction. This style of writing could as well nurture the telling of a non-fictional tale. In fact, journalists have been incorporating this style for a while to make their writings more intriguing to the readers.

Sometimes they overuse it and it's hard to see the message they're trying to convey, and those are not as successful except with the snobby readers who come for entertainment and not for news, but other times, they do it just right and you feel like you're reading a fiction book, a fantasy novel, perhaps, but it's all a take on true events.

There was plenty of reality in this story, but also a lot of overused junk. Hopefully, I didn't turn off any snobby readers. :)

Thanks. I don't see it as high quality stuff, but glad you enjoyed reading it. I think it's fun to experiment with different genres occasionally.