Wow, that was intense to say the least. I found many great moments and could picture everything quite nicely. It was a nice way to set up the beginning of her story, in my opinion.

I liked the mention of "summer air" even though it's snowy, because it feels like it's really, you know, "normal" for the characters living in such a setting. Maybe it's normal for a lot of people, actually, but since I'm from a somewhat hot climate with no below-zero temperatures, it's really alien to me.

If I had to suggest something, I'd say reinforcing the icey/snowy ambiance, especially when you have contrasts like the one I just mentioned, though. It helps keep the feeling consistent.

En fin, steem on and write on, Surf of Knasendorf. Nice post!