Hello Naillon11!

First of all thank you for the constructive comment. I'm a fledgling writer with next to no experience under my belt and am still trying to figure things out. Comments like yours help me to hone my craft and make a more enjoyable read for everybody. So please feel free to at any time.

As for the characters, I see them very vividly in my head and then struggle to get in words what i see. But its definitely something I strive to do with each one of them. It would be my wishes that the reader begins to identify with the characters, develops favourites and becomes interested in their individual story lines and how they intertwine with each other.

Thank you for reading and I hope I can continue to write material you enjoy.

Best,

Steemydave