Eyes Wide Shut (Steemit 50-word Story Contest Entry)
NO! Not a coach in sight
I can’t save her
I can’t show my face again
On the tracks he sat
The train, inching closer
A little boy, laughing in the background
Why didn’t he just take the train mommy?
He did honey, in the only way he knew how...
Nice story @advent.
And yes, you got everything right
Great, thanks so much for letting me know. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's stories as well!
Great story, I hope you win
Thank you!