Eyes Wide Shut (Steemit 50-word Story Contest Entry)

in #fiftywords • 8 years ago

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NO! Not a coach in sight
I can’t save her
I can’t show my face again
On the tracks he sat
The train, inching closer
A little boy, laughing in the background
Why didn’t he just take the train mommy?
He did honey, in the only way he knew how...

#coach #story #twist
8 years ago in #fiftywords by
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     8 years ago 

    Nice story @advent.

    And yes, you got everything right

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       8 years ago 

      Great, thanks so much for letting me know. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's stories as well!

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