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RE: Lost to the Sea -- Fifty word short

in #fiftywords6 years ago

This is an intense and powerful story, @aksounder. I have read it several times, just imagining what such an event would be like in real life.

How wonderful that you guys are supporting one another with edits. Those folks are some of the best editors I have ever met!

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Thank you Jayna! I took a look back at the version I thought I was going to settle on as my final, but this one is sooo much better. Good editing is paramount and I know those three appriciate your kind compliment.

The fifty word exercises are so much fun and a tight packed challenge. I'm thinking of expanding this one into a longer flash fiction, but also look forward to next week's.

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That is one of the little perks of a 50-word story. It can spark a much longer one, sometimes bringing into consciousness a whole reality that needs to be explored, like the world beyond the wardrobe.