Restless anxiety - 50 word Story Contest Week #17

in #fiftywords7 years ago

My thoughts – beetles, squirming in a jar. Fireflies. Bzzzz. My ears are buzzing, my hair hurts. I spin like a peg-top.
A slow ecstatic wave saturates me.
I see colourful umbrellas throbbing in neons. I can tear my skin off and jump out like a cocoon. Grownup. Undamaged. Naked.

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Good stuff, @k1kkz! Descriptive and intriguing premise. Keep on pushing to get noticed and one day, you most definitely will be. :)

Thank you :) Support means a lot!

I like it.. :) I just put in a submission for week 18.. good job upvoted