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RE: No One Can Hear You :: 50 Word Story Challenge

in #fiftywords7 years ago

I did have the Star Wars scene in my head when I wrote it, except in their case they could hear each other scream and had some means to make their escape.

Being trapped in a container and being slowly squished to death would be initially claustrophobic, then panic-inducing, then you probably just go insane briefly before you actually die.