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RE: My Entry - Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #35!
I agree with the guys, tactic/strategy and dialogues are the strong points of this story. I'd also add that I appreciated the Captain's temper.
I agree with the guys, tactic/strategy and dialogues are the strong points of this story. I'd also add that I appreciated the Captain's temper.
lol, Thanks, I had to make the tactic and mechanics work in my head. Those ships don't sail like they seem to in the movies.
The temperament was really without thought, but whether it is a man or a woman a good leader as to remain calm, take input from others, and decide then take action...