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RE: Finish the Story Contest - Week #43!
I might have gone the obvious route for this one, so thought I better get in there early, so here we have it, the weekly offering to appease the-never-quite-satisfied great greedy god, who is also all knowing and wise and fair and just and please don't smite me
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@calluna/sharp-clouds-in-eden-finish-the-story-entry
Not obvious in the least, Calluna! Won't be any smiting from this happy deity, who is happily contented with the lavish feast your story offered.
I remember another time where you said that your ending was obvious and I just thought: if this is obvious, then what will happen when there will be an original one? She will probably create a space-time warp or maybe a black hole or an antimatter explosion.
Okay okay, not so much the titan plant or the synthetic, but the dying part, and to be fair, that wasn't as popular as I thought it would be. Need to kill off characters somewhere now don't i? ;)