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Doctor Morre, hahah. Appropriate. All the elements are effective and in their place. I like the flashback before the incident and the way you characterized the protagonist. The final twist is also a nice touch and, like everything here, coherent and realistic.

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dear @dirge, you wrote a beautiful story, so dramatic but with a great final hope, the miracle of life that takes place once again. I wonder if we will come to such states of research to seek perhaps eternal life :-)) congratulations on your work and your vote curie

Hi. Thanks for reading and for the nice comments.

The baby is supposed to be horrific. The woman gives birth to herself.

Dirge + final of hope = creation of antimatter.

damn! I didn't understand this, because of my bad English + translator !! I thought it was their son. then no, it's terrible

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Great twist at the end @dirge! I thought this would be one of those stories hurtling towards drug testing but ended up being something else. The burden of living life with guilt must be one of the greatest punishment.

A brilliant story. The first place in the competition, well-deserved. Congratulations, @dirge!

I've got to be honest. This is landing slowly with me so I'll have to give it time for the "oh" moment to arrive. I even went down into the comments section. I don't understand how she gave birth to herself.

I love how you crafted your sentences. Fun read.

Congrats on the double curie!!!