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RE: Ora et Labora (Finish The Story 54 Entry)
That works so well, when you explained it I wasn't sure but you've done it so well. I love that you added someone else like him, it just expands the story outside of the confines of the prompt.
I knew i wasn't explaining it well, but I could tell lol, i didn't want to hold you hostage in the car while i explained it, and figured if i kept talking while you pulled that face, i would chicken out haha i had very much stuck to trying to use every bit of the prompt (except that backpack, damn it, had to cut that), i had wanted to bring something new in. Oh i am glad it came together!