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RE: Bananafish Denouement: Finish the Story Contest #40
Fucking. Baller.
The disjointed narrative threw me off at first, but that ending was so worth the build-up! Well done!
Fucking. Baller.
The disjointed narrative threw me off at first, but that ending was so worth the build-up! Well done!
The nice thing about being a writer--you get to order the universe the way you want it, not the way it is. I love your comment!