Ah, th' noise-work and pirate/redneck accents in this post be a godsend. Regardless, this ending did good in th' combat scene and made some good use o' pirate tactics. Also the fact that th' two ships were active in spite of what anybody was doin', thus a natural background scene that interrupted the foreground scene. Anyhow, th' Madame/Lass Cap'n was active and she command'd well in her spot, so can't complain t'ere.

Withal, the last sentences leaves a suspenseful cliffhanga', that's fo' sho'. So leavin' us to guiltily think o' what happen'd th' scene after. Ho! Upvot'd and resteem'd.