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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @lovinah
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [7.9/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided a vivid account of a road traffic accident, describing the injuries of the motorcyclist and passenger. The narrative effectively conveys personal regret for not knowing first aid skills. | Expanding on specific first aid steps, such as controlling bleeding or supporting an injured limb, could strengthen the response. Additionally, focusing on the primary question regarding the role of a first responder would enhance relevance. The narrative could benefit from specific first aid terminology and details on actions. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 2 | Demonstrated a strong understanding of the DRABC protocol and presented each step in a clear and logical sequence. | Including details on maintaining a safe scene, such as how to assess danger, would be beneficial. Consider what different dangers could be present for a road traffic accident, like traffic hazards, broken glass, or motor vehicle parts. When discussing responsiveness, mention specific verbal prompts or ways to check for consciousness. Also, if the casualty doesn’t respond, what would you do in that case? Additionally, you didn’t mention anything about checking breathing or how you would assess if the airway passage is clear or not. Describe how you would visually and manually assess breathing and pulse as well. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a detailed and visually appealing illustration of the DRABC protocol, showcasing creativity and effort in design. | Overall, very good work with the illustration. I really liked the chart you made. Keep up the good work. | [Grade: 2.3] |
| Question 4 | Provided a clear list of emergency numbers for the local area, with a well-organized presentation that includes essential services. | Consider enhancing the list by explaining the function of each service and adding specialized helplines (national suicide prevention, police emergency). This could make the list more informative and useful. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz with good accuracy, demonstrating a grasp of essential first aid concepts covered in the lesson. | Excellent work here; 9 out of 10 questions were correct. | [Grade: 2.2] |
General Feedback: Your homework demonstrates a solid understanding of the DRABC protocol and the importance of quick action in emergencies. The illustration and details you provided show effort and creativity. For improvement, focus on providing additional specific first aid actions in your responses. This will enhance the quality of your submissions and make your answers more informative. Great work overall specially the illustration.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Thank you teacher for the review!
Correction is well noted i will do my better in the next class.