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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid"
Student Name: @iddy
Time of Checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [8.6/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Described a vivid emergency experience, providing a clear sequence of events and demonstrating a good grasp of first response importance. | You answered the question clearly, providing each step effectively. Good work. Additionally, remember that chest compressions should reach a depth of about 5–6 cm, not just “compressions.” | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 2 | Applied the DRABC protocol to the accident scenario effectively, covering each step with explanations. | You explained all the steps well, but it would be helpful to clarify how you would assess if the patient is responsive and if their airway is open. Breathing and pulse assessments are separate: breathing involves observing chest movement or feeling for airflow, while a pulse can be checked at the wrist. Additionally, avoid calling emergency services yourself; instead, ask a bystander to do so. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a flowchart with Canva that explained the DRABC protocol visually with clear step-by-step guidance. | Ensure all DRABC protocol steps are clearly represented. Adding more descriptive captions or icons, like actions to take if a step cannot be met or if conditions are unfavorable, would improve clarity. | [Grade: 2.0] |
| Question 4 | Provided a well-organized list of emergency numbers relevant to the locality, covering diverse services. | The response would benefit from a brief description of each emergency service listed to provide context. Adding additional helpline numbers, like the national suicide prevention helpline, would make this section even more comprehensive. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 5 | Displayed a thorough understanding of first aid concepts with a strong quiz performance and detailed screenshots as support. | Excellent knowledge displayed. Going forward, consider exploring additional emergency procedures for complex situations. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Overall, your submission reflects a solid understanding of first aid and emergency response protocols, with thoughtful application and explanations. A few extra details, such as specific assessments in the DRABC protocol and including additional helplines, could add further depth. Great work—keep building on these emergency response skills!
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Thank you very much, @abdu.navi03, for the the review.