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RE: SLC-S21W1 | Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @memamun
Time of checking: After 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [7.9/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared compelling personal experiences, emphasizing the importance of first response skills in life-threatening situations. | While the experiences were impactful, further detail on the steps taken during CPR and the child's recovery would enhance your response. Consider explaining how you ensured the child's airway was clear and any specific techniques used in your intervention. Additionally, discuss what different techniques and steps you would have taken if you were a first responder at that time. | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 2 | Provided a thorough approach to managing a road traffic accident scene using the DRABC protocol, demonstrating awareness of safety and the importance of calling emergency services. | Clarify the process for checking the injured person's breathing and circulation. Mention specific techniques for controlling bleeding and emphasize that the casualty should not be moved unless necessary. Additionally, ensure to explain the importance of not removing objects obstructing the airway. Remember not to call the emergency services by yourself; instead, ask someone from the public to do so, and keep yourselves busy in assisting the casualty. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a clear and informative representation of the DRABC protocol, showcasing creativity and a good understanding of the steps involved. | Excellent work on the visual representation. However, consider adding more discreet locations in the design to help maintain clarity and focus on the information presented. Also, in airway management, the passage of the airway and any potential obstruction should be assessed rather than just checking for breathing. Similarly, in response, the consciousness of the casualty is evaluated, not solely their breathing. | [Grade: 2.0] |
| Question 4 | Listed essential emergency contact numbers for Bangladesh, which is a crucial aspect of first response planning. | Include a brief description of each number's purpose for better clarity. Adding contact numbers for additional services, such as mental health support, crisis hotlines, women's helpline, national suicide prevention, and natural disaster rescue, would make the list more comprehensive and valuable. | [Grade: 0.7] |
| Question 5 | Demonstrated engagement and understanding by attempting the quiz, showing a proactive approach to learning. | Great job! You answered 10 out of 10 questions correctly. Keep up the consistent efforts in the next assignment. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Overall, you have shown a strong understanding of first response protocols and the importance of effective communication during emergencies. Your personal experiences added depth to your responses. Focus on enhancing your details in areas such as CPR and emergency contact numbers, as they are vital for clarity and effectiveness in your future work. Keep up the excellent engagement with the quizzes!
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03