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RE: SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @adese
Overall grade: 7.2
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. | There are a few shortcomings in this question as you didn't mention what the 'clutching throat' action is termed. You didn't mention that in complete obstruction people might clutch their throats titghtly. Some people are allergic to certain edibles which may cause sudden partial or complete obstruction whereas some people might have something stuck in their airway passage. There is concise information on the physiological changes in body while choking. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing a Heimlich maneuver. | The student has a few shortcomings in this question. Important The number of thrusts are missing in this question. Even though pictorial demonstration of the Heimlich Maneuver is also included by the student, the picturs show something very different than the explanation. The hand positioning in the picture is wrong. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. Good explanation | The number of thrusts in the Heimlich Maneuver are missing. You mentioned CPR. How many compressions? You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course.. I enjoyed reading this post but there were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Thank you so much for this review
I really appreciate