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RE: SLC21/WK6: Understanding Burns: Types, Causes, and First Aid Responses

in #firstaid-s21w6 • 12 days ago

Student Name: @goodybest
Overall grade: 8.7
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: no

QuestionWhat the Student Did WellAreas for ImprovementGrading
Question 1Provided the course of action in this specific situation . Good workeven though the student mentioned DRABC, Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper.[Grade: 1.7]
Question 2the student listed down the course of action for an electrical burn.[Grade: 2]
Question 3Listed the steps of managing an emergency chemical burning scenario.The problem in the first aid was not flushing the burn site for a longer period of time. Atleast 20 minutes of flushing is recommended for a chemical burn.[Grade: 1.5]
Question 4The student managed to present their logic in choosing the answer.The ethics as well as the Triage dictate that the patient with a 2nd degree burn should be treated first as the patient with a third degree burn has his nerves damaged so currently he is not in severe pain whereas the patient with a 2nd degree burn might be going through excruciating pain and if not attended immediately would be left with grave consequences[Grade: 1.5]
Question 5the student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider.[Grade: 2]

General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course. I definitely enjoyed reading your article. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.

Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1

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    Thank you for the review, Prof. Indeed, there's always room for improvement.

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      even though the student mentioned DRABC, Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper.

      Hi Doc, I think this has escaped your notice because I mentioned them:

      Point 1: by quickly moving the child away from the source of the hot tea, as this will prevent further injury.

      Point no 5: I will cover the burn area using either a sterile, non-adhesive bandage or clean clothing after cooling it. Materials like this will not stick to the burn.

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