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RE: Apocalypse

I really like this. I find it very artistic and mythical. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps you might want to change the phrase "termed 'crazy'." to "called Crazy", 'Termed' is used for objects and processes, "called" is used for people and animals.

Other than that I really did enjoy it. I'm going to feature it in my Fiction Trail Update later today.

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Advice heeded. Thank you very much!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yay! I'm really pumped!!