I wish I could speak with you to tell you in person how much I adore the story you and Marco wrote. tip! I'd like for you to be able to see the gestures that I make and hear my laughter over the faces (and their names, you cheeky man 😂). Your telling of the train, Theodore's boredom, and his discovery of someone else had me hooked. I hit the end before I knew it and went back to the beginning because I didn't want it to be over.
The flow of the story tells of the connection that you and Marco share, it's beautiful to be able to read. What a fantastic friendship the two of you share!! Instead of two minds and styles competing, you complimented each other.
I'm happy that the two of you had fun together writing this and (selfishly hope) that the two of you will do it again!