Your prose is engaging, well written, and full of fun surprises!
One question: if the woman has wings, why does she need to ride a butterfly...?
FANTASTIC images!! I love this!
Your prose is engaging, well written, and full of fun surprises!
One question: if the woman has wings, why does she need to ride a butterfly...?
FANTASTIC images!! I love this!
I wondered that too, but you can't stop the freewriting train for logic when you're using the most dangerous writing app! I figured maybe she wasn't strong enough to fly with all the armor? But then why would a butterfly be stronger than a magical creature?