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RE: Ghosts (freewrite)

in #freewrite5 years ago

I thought he intended to SAVE all those lives but never got there in time, and never learned his lesson, but I am notorious for mis-reading and misunderstanding.
You’d think he’s crazy, locking people up and forgetting about them, but that’s not true. He never meant to do that, he was going to save them, at some point.
To me, that adds all the more horror (and irony) to the story.
And this!
... it’s his fate, his punishment if you want, to wander the halls and face all the ghosts. He can never be free, like they were never set free and whose fault is it?
Eerie story, well written, with wit and dark humor--and surely one that took more than 5 minutes to write, edit, and post--I apprpove! #LoveIt!

I was already nominating it for @Freewritehouse Friday Favorites before I noticed you'd won @curie's attention as well. Congratulations!

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Thanks, @carolkean! I did not post it to @mariannewest's traditional challenge as there was no way I could squeeze in any prompt this time!

I understand - but with the Wednesday challenge, I figured you'd earned a mention. Yes, I exceed my bounds - and have been fired from volunteer jobs for it, but I never learn. (Now, a paid job, that's another story. I'm better at following rules and sticking to the limits then!)