#freewrite (a glimpse into my head) PROMPT: RedsteemCreated with Sketch.

in #freewrite • 7 years ago


A sigh, released
could bring her peace
from lips
so frail and red
But breath was weak
Too weak to speak
the words
they should have said
A heart was torn
Her soul, forlorn
Distain
was left instead
And as it goes
the pain she knows
remains
the color red

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     7 years ago 

    Oh my god, did you say you created this in just 5 minutes? No way. this is beautiful and so so profound. You are really creative and someone who deserves more recognition. Resteeming this little gem. :)

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you so much!

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       7 years ago 

      This is really interesting, it has rhythm and it's very well composed and musical. Well done!