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RE: Taste of banana - A story written in five minutes
good to have you back! You are so convincing in your first-person fiction. If I didn't know that there is no way that you smoked for 20 years - well, maybe if you started as a small child - you would have fooled me.
Yes, he just about had me fooled, too, 'til I read the other comments!
Drat! Definitely shouldn't have commented on the story's actual credibility! :P
I've learned my lesson, will be more mysterious next time! >;D
Would've had to start as a two-year-old toddler then! :P
Thank you very much! I maybe never should have told you my age and never should've told anyone it wasn't true in the comments! :D
Definitely missed writing myself, and am actually excited about the fact that I now must write anew because I'm all out of prewritten stories for the @davidkain account :P
What!!
You are only 22?
You had me... I really thought it was your experience...
I should have read the comments first before sending you the next prompt hahaha
Very nicely done :D
Yep! 22!
In my defense, I do prefer the company of people older than me, though, and kinda look older myself (or at least so I'm told), so it's rather easy to make that mistake :P But then again... You didn't judge by my looks. All story! :P
Very happy to have fooled you, haha! :D I'll try and fool you again! >;D
Thanks for stopping by ^^
All story,
Your picture yes, you do not look like someone who has been smoking for 20 years hahaha
I shall look out for those mind tricks ;p
Some are subtle, though, and some are very real. That's what's the most fun about it! You never know what is true and what is fiction! ;)
Yes, that does make it exciting ... :)
Well, we saw your face too LOL. And since you have written so many different versions of characters, after a while I would have caught on without you telling 😄
Yes!! Write!!
Hmmm~ Should've grown my beard out more and let my baldness shine in all its beauty, and convince you I'm 30-ish. >;P
I hear that pretty often lately, and I've started saying it myself, too, so definitely am going to write today as soon as I get home! :D
It is good to be young, full of energy and talented!! Age will come soon enough. Enjoy what you got 👍
It's amazing how time flies, and it only appears to be going ever faster. I'm 22 myself, and I cannot even begin to imagine how fast time is flying by for people older than me.
Enjoying myself and making the most of it indeed! ^^ And thanks!
(Especially thanks for the talented adjective). :shy:
You are talented and might as well own it. That is one thing I had to learn after coming to the US. Here, you have to own your worth and stand up for it in a way that is considered rude or conceded in Europe.
Here, it is a bit much, but I feel in Europe (at least when I was living there) the constant downplaying of your own strength and talents if not healthy...
So, breath it in and own it 🤓
Ah, snap, shouldn't have upvoted your comment that soon
Thank you.
And yes, the downplaying, let's call it for what it is, does carry its very own burden with it. And I believe you're right. We should own our strengths and be proud of them. Otherwise we just get stuck in our little self conscious loops of self-pity. :|
So, thank you, and will do (or at least try my best to!). ;D