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RE: The Ant Who Loved to Paint | Five-Minute Freewrite

in #freewrite6 years ago

Ahh I liked the story but I feel like Art said the wrong thing at the end. Lol I felt like he would have said he's moving on to better things or that he is starting something new. I guess "I quit." Just didn't vibe with me.

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