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RE: Weekend Freewrite. On Monday morning.
As usual, beautiful. Extremely creative: The setup; the building of anticipation; the unanswered reason, "why?" I wanted closure and completion ... and since you didn't provide it, it left me "wanting more."
It happened fast, they all did say
When recounting the scene
All but Nellie, who recounts
A slow-mo sequenced dream
Nice. Turning a thing back upon itself depending upon perspective.
The tricks of a raconteur.
Quill