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I love the emotional ups and downs of your story. How one manipulator gets a worse one and how he doesn't get away with every premeditated wrongdoing.
You can feel the masculine vision of the initial problem posed. Unlike most, your story presents the woman as a bad, very bad, and the man as a puppet transformed into an evil puppet.
Very good sequel, my friend! Well done!
Thank you. The evilness of the woman was absent in the first idea I got to finish the story. She would just get rid of him because he was a pain in the ass. Then, as I thought about what would make anyone stand these kinds of people the idea of a guilty past emerged and took over.