It's brilliant! My only small critique is that the story at the start while he's walking to the entrance goes by a little fast. I'm a fast reader and found it flew by. Can't wait to see all the rest of the stuff you're gonna do! :)
It's brilliant! My only small critique is that the story at the start while he's walking to the entrance goes by a little fast. I'm a fast reader and found it flew by. Can't wait to see all the rest of the stuff you're gonna do! :)