Haiku Contest #2: Bugs and Arachnids in Winter

in #haiku7 years ago

Welcome to the second haiku contest!

The first one was such a success that I can't resist doing another. Seriously—go read the entries to the first contest. They are all great!

This one has a theme, provided by @negativer and @bex-dk and tweaked by me. The theme is: Bugs and Arachnids in Winter.

That is to say, please feature bugs or arachnids in your haiku in some way, but also remember: it's currently winter and haiku usually should feature something of the current season. Perhaps this means seeing the bugs waking up outside, with spring so near, or maybe it means seeing one that is wintering inside your house for warmth, or... well, your idea!

Haiku Contest Rules

  1. Upvote and Resteem this post. Tell your friends on Discord or steemit chat. The more people we can get involved here, the more fun we can have.

  2. Write a haiku.

    • Post it in the comments to this post
    • Make your own post with the haiku and a link to this post
    • Oh yeah, and while it's not required, I would prefer if your haiku were original. That is, that you aren't using the same one you previous submitted to another contest on Steemit.
  3. You may include a title or a headnote. A headnote is a short bit of text that sets the scene for the haiku. Some haiku poets use them (Basho and Shiki did) and some don't. You may also include a photo if you want.

  4. No syllable requirement, just keep it short. Aim for one breath. You can read my thoughts on syllable counts in English haiku here.

  5. In addition to the theme for this contest, it should have some kind of reference to nature and have a juxtaposition of images. I write should not must. If you think your haiku is strong enough to do without, go for it. I am not stuck in tradition and I welcome new creative ideas.

  6. Consider this quote from Jack Kerouac:

    [A] Haiku must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella.

  7. Have at it!

  8. (Psst—If you are stuck for ideas, go read some of the translated haiku in my Haiku of Japan series. Here is the latest with links to previous ones at the end, or follow the haiku tag here on Steemit)

Sample

Here is a haiku I used in the article referenced above.

evening
snow beating down
my son is snoring

You can see I give a nod to the season, and there is also a shift in the action as we move from the scene (lines 1 and 2) to my son.

Another Sample

This one, a classic from Buson:

on the temple bell
sleeping
a butterfly

You can read more about that haiku here.

An American Haiku Sample

And here is one of my favorites from Jack Kerouac:

No telegram today
only more leaves
fell.

Close Date and Prizes

Contest will go for 7 days, so that means the final day you can submit is next Friday the 23rd (Japan time).

Special thanks to @tinypaleokitchen of the Writers Block who donated 10 SBD for use in this contest. With her contribution along with the same among I gave away last time, the prizes for this week will be as follows.

5 SBD for first place. 3.5 SBD for second place. 2 SBD for third place. And 2 SBD in the pot for an honorable mentions or two.

I will be the sole judge.

Even if you've never written haiku before, I encourage you to give it a try! And Have fun!





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Moon shines on
spider in my head
hiding monsters under bed

Cool contest! I've never written haiku before, I'm surprised by how very different it is from writing other forms of poetry. Here's my attempt:

https://steemit.com/haiku/@bennettitalia/porcelain-a-haiku-for-dbooster-s-haiku-contest-2-bugs-and-arachnids-in-winter

##Porcelain

water
rushing from the faucet
wakes a sleeping spider

Ha! I followed you here.

Hehe! Wait... did I follow somebody here? I think I did. Or I might have just stumbled upon it.

In any case, I remember the geckos and skeeters in FL!

Here is my entry it is called A talented child
(Image credit myself)
a_talented_child_2_by_corvus_sky-1.jpg

Let me sleep
wings dream of future
life transformed

and the link to the official post https://steemit.com/poetry/@tygertyger/a-talented-child-dbooster-s-haiku-contest-2-bugs-and-arachnids-in-winter-following-his-3-5-3-suggestion

Haiku Entry



"Supervīvere"

winter has appear
one lays an unseen pitfall
to survive the night.

ice nature winter snow white spider webs_www.animalhi.com_61.jpg

Original Haiku By : @memeitbaby

(Click here to be directed to the post)

#steemitfamilyph #haiku #poetry

Go on then, missed the first one but I'll give this one a go:

image.jpeg

ice drips
from a chrysalis...
first spring wind

Kind of on the cusp of winter-spring, hope that works ;). Image from wikimedia commons: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Chrysalis_or_pupa_-geograph.org.uk-_1173400.jpg

Under the gel
Opilione wait in the garden
In a piece wood

nature-2015094_640.jpg
https://pixabay.com/

This is the first time I write a haiku.
On the patience of waiting for the end of winter.

https://steemit.com/contest/@archeothot/opilione-haiku-contest-2

Hello sir, @dbooster. An awesome contest you've got here. I particularly like the fact that you do not wish to make us adhere strictly to whole syllable thing.. I think haikus are better expressed as they come..


CARAPACE

There is a smooth, black carapace;

Crawling against the cold white earth;

Pain and beauty in its arms...

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Image credit: Getty images

Here's the link to the post;
https://steemit.com/poetry/@divineinyang/carapace