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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #45 (English)

in #haikucontest5 years ago

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undisturbed pond -
a muskrat contemplates
making a wake

This is a honkadori of Matsuo Bashō's

An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.

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What a honkadori! You know...this contest name is the third ku of that specific haiku: mizu no oto (noise of water)

I couldn't find the haiku in the Japanese, not that I could have read it anyway. Now I am even more happy I chose it.
Someone else wrote a honkadori of that very haiku as well. I think it was josemalavem.