RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #11

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theironfelix (62)in #haikucontest • 6 years ago (edited)

Here be me entry for this contests:

"Docked, tethered, loaded"

Wish, wash, wham, wish, wash, woosh, wham

- Maritime noises.

6 years ago in #haikucontest by theironfelix (62)

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jayna (69) 6 years ago

Very nice, @theironfelix. I love the sounds. Be sure to add two more syllables to your second line. :)

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theironfelix (62) 6 years ago

UwU ~ thanks for reading, the compliments and spotting that error.

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agmoore (64) 6 years ago

Lively, vivid!

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theironfelix (62) 6 years ago

UwU~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Just the elementary noises of Maritime work.

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