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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #25 (English)

in #haikucontest6 years ago

Trees and dirt confirm
Our path, narrow and forward
Our home, far behind

Dropping the haiku here now, before tucking in for bed. A down payment on further comment.

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I love that!

Very nice, I feel the sense of adventure and travel

Cool Cheers!

I really liked this haiku, @vdux.
By using the verb confirm, you poetically invert what we usually do: it's not nature turned into a metaphor for life, but life turned into a metaphor that trees confirm.
Very good!
A hug!

Thank you!